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10:52 PM, Wednesday July 14th 2021

I appreciate the critique! Thanks for pointing out my misguided fear about extreme angles, I think I needed that reminder to focus on the basics during the learning phase.

Is it also alright for me to ask a follow-up question? For your second point on things to keep an eye on, can you give an example of contour lines that don't really contribute to the construction itself? I mainly tried to use contour lines to reinforce the direction in which a form is wrapping around the torso or head (mostly to convince myself of their three-dimensionality), but maybe there were cases where I was excessive or not using contours correctly. I'm not sure if I fully understand what I'm doing wrong on this point.

11:00 PM, Wednesday July 14th 2021

They're mostly small cases, but one example I can point out is the mass on the back of this cat's neck. Those two contour lines didn't really contribute any further solidity/definition to the form that wasn't already established in how its silhouette defined its interaction with the existing structure. If it had, then two would still have been overkill in such a small area.

11:12 PM, Wednesday July 14th 2021

Ah, I see. Thanks for the clarification!

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