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8:36 PM, Monday July 4th 2022

Here are my revisions. Definitely still having trouble with clean lines.

https://imgur.com/a/3hflhsN

8:15 PM, Thursday July 7th 2022

Sorry for the delay in getting back to your revisions, I've been flat out this week.

Definitely looking better here. Your superimposed lines are coming along well and you're doing a good job keeping the horizontals parallel and verticals perpendicular to the horizon line in the rough perspective. Your estimation of perspective is not too far off the mark and where it does, it varies in exactly the ways we expect it to for beginners just starting out - less accurate the further the box is from the vanishing point.

With that, I'm marking this lesson as complete. Keep practicing these exercises in your warm-ups and I'm sure you'll see some good gains in line confidence by the end of the box challenge.

Next Steps:

Feel free to move onto the 250 box challenge.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
8:25 PM, Thursday July 7th 2022

No worries, and thank you!

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