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7:11 PM, Saturday August 28th 2021
edited at 7:14 PM, Aug 28th 2021

Don't worry you will not need to redo any of them.

The flow of tour arrows is pretty good and your leaves are good too.

  1. The use of construction in your first plant is good but you need to work on your confidence

  2. Be careful to not flatten out your forms with the detail and the blobs, the cactus is a relatively simple construction so be careful with those little details.

Despite tour wobbly lines your constructions feel pretty organic. So good job

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The main problem seems to be your confidence and the use of line weight, so keep working on that

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edited at 7:14 PM, Aug 28th 2021
7:18 AM, Tuesday September 7th 2021

Thank you for the critique!

Making smooth lines is honestly stressful, it's gonna be one hell of an accomplishment to improve them lol. I'll start paying very conscious attention to my confidence/smoothness from now on.

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