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12:35 AM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

Heyo!

Overall good work ?

Lines

  • Your linework was mostly confident and smooth.

  • Little to no signs of arching, no consistent cases of fraying and no repeated lines, so great job!

Ellipses

  • Your exercises were done nicely indicating that you understood the exercise at its core.

  • There were little to no signs of overlapping, most of the ellipses were done 2-3 times per instructions and stayed within its area, nice!

Boxes

  • You stayed true to the ghosting method to construct your boxes, well done!

  • It would seem that you misunderstood the Rough Perspective exercise, correct me if I'm wrong but it looks as though you used a ruler/straight edge to "plot" your lines back to the vanishing point similar to the Plotted Perspective exercise.

For clarity, in the Rough Perspective exercise, you are only to use a ruler to plot the lines of your boxes back to the vanishing point, AFTER you've construct your boxes (by ghosting).

Overall as I stated previously you've done good work! I would recommend redoing the Rough Perspective exercise just to re-introduce you to its methods and be able to see how your eyes tend to assume how far/close the vanishing point is/isn't and then you may move on to the 250 Boxes Challenge. ( ??? )?

Next Steps:

2 Pages of Rough Perspective

250 Box Challenge

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
12:51 AM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

First of all Thank you for the critique

And yes I think I misunderstood the purpose of the red lines and used a ruler.

Though I only used it with red lines, and I used no ruler and only the ghosting method for the box .

I thought it should be done with the ruler to see the difference between my lines (the box ) and right lines (red line) , I know is seems stupid know that I think about it.

I'll try not to do this in the future :-) ,

Thank you and appreciate you taking the time .

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