10:29 AM, Tuesday November 10th 2020
Hi Vankata,
Thanks for crit, it's greatly appreciated. You've pointed out some things I hadn't spotted myself so it was very helpful.
I do find it very hard to resist correcting lines although i must admit some of those are poor attempts at adding line weight.
Where I've done ellipse practices before the emphasis has been to try and get it on the first go, so having to go around a few times its easy to get carried away!
Thanks again!