9:15 AM, Friday August 14th 2020
Oh, sorry. I made it shareable https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1F5u_NhxeYzBecfA6xBLLIlN6fcfnlOtC?usp=sharing
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8:17 PM, Friday August 14th 2020
Ok, I can see the blood now, Be careful!
Anyway, your texture homework is significantly improved. I don't think any specific feedback is necessary as you are going in a good direction with it now.
The organic arrows are still sloppy. You have a lot of lines that intersect(for example the 'body' of an arrow will intersect everywhere with the 'head' of the arrow). There's also still a slight issue with arrows expanding and narrowing randomly(although less than before). There is more variety in the arrows now though, so that is an improvement.
I scrolled through other people's homework and found a good example for organic arrows.
https://imgur.com/gallery/ywK9Be1
I'm marking your lesson as complete, as we aren't chasing perfectionism here. I gave you a more indepth feedback on the arrows again because there is another organic arrows exercise in lesson 3 that you'll need to do. I think analyzing the work of the person I linked will help you improve.
Next Steps:
Good luck with lesson 3!
8:34 AM, Saturday August 15th 2020
Thanks for the critique. It had been really helpful :)
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