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9:14 PM, Wednesday May 19th 2021

These are definitely a step in the right direction, keep experimenting with pushing your shadows more.

I'll be moving you on lesson 3 and marking your submission complete.

Keep practicing previous exercises as warm ups and good luck!

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Move on to lesson 3.

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2:58 PM, Monday May 24th 2021

Thanks!

Can you show me what you mean by pushing my shadows more?

4:24 PM, Monday May 24th 2021

From the looks of it, you're still a little timid in terms of where you put your cast shadows. There are a lot of places where you could be more bold, allowing them to cover more of the surface upon which they're cast. Here I've drawn on top of your page to show how those cast shadows could be pushed further.

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