7:05 PM, Saturday February 26th 2022
Hi, no problem, take your time, from what I can see it's getting better. As for the lineweight, try to apply it just to the overlapping lines. For example, on that leg, you applied lineweight, which is good, because that area is full of lines; but you also applied it to the underside of the leg, which doesn't have any overlapping lines.
So what you should do is give more lineweight to the overside of that leg, ghosting every line, that way they will be precise and confident. And just to the section that overlaps with the body, the section that is alone on the side doesn't need it.