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10:49 PM, Monday December 13th 2021

Hii! I'll be reviewing your homework today.

First of all well done on completing the exercises!

Arrows

I think you did a great job compressing the arrows, in the sense that they move farther/towards the viewer, creating the depth illusion, however, your lines aren't very confident and are kinda "hairy", so i'd recommend you to pay attention to this matter, ghost your lines before drawing them and all that lesson 1 stuff.

Organic Forms

These came out great! You kept the forms simple, the ellipses are drawn through, they are aligned with the axis, the angle changes, they are within the form boundaries and also the contours are hooked, so good job!

Texture analysis

Again, great work done here, you focused on the forms of the casted shadows, there are no random marks. But i think you could've had made the transition on the black bar smoother, because the black bar is still pretty visible and we don't want that.

Dissections

This is, in my opinion, the hardest exercise i've done so far, and your drawings are very good! You broke the silhouette of the forms, you wrapped the texture around it and the transitions are great.

Form intersections

I think overall you did a good job, you ghosted most of the lines, they are drawn confidently, but again, watch out for the "hairy" lines, if you're trying to add line weight to it you need to ghost that same line carefully and then do the mark, just like in any other situation.

Organic intersections

This one also came out great, you kept the forms simples, the shadows are drawn accordingly to the shape is being cast onto, but some of the forms are kind of floating so i'd be careful with that too, but i guess is more of a practice thing.

I hope this was helpful somehow, overall you did a great job and i think you're ready for lesson 3!

Good luck!

Next Steps:

On to Lesson 3.

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8:20 PM, Friday December 17th 2021

Thank you for the feedback and I did find it helpful! I will definitely ghost my lines more.

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