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5:31 PM, Thursday April 11th 2024

Starting with your cylinders around arbitrary minor axes, your work here is by and large done fairly well. I have a couple suggestions to offer, although as a whole you're taking care with executing your marks and applying the principles of the ghosting method, and you're quite fastidious in checking the alignment of those ellipses afterwards when marking in your red minor axes. You're catching both more obvious issues, as well as the minor ones that can easily be overlooked and cause us to plateau in our growth.

So there's two main things I want you to keep in mind going forward.

  • Firstly, you have a tendency here to draw your cylinders quite small, with a fair bit of space around them left free, to the point that you could probably draw those cylinders twice as big without them touching or overlapping. When it comes to the spatial reasoning we're continually exploring throughout this course, drawing bigger helps a lot, so be sure to make full use of the space available to you.

  • The other point is that it helps to keep in mind that the "shifts" from one ellipse to the other - both in its overall scale as the cylinder's side edges converge more dramatically, and in its shift in degree, getting wider as we move farther back along the cylinder's length, are both manifestations of foreshortening. In other words, they convey the same information - just how much of the cylinder's length can be measured directly on the page, and how much is hidden in the "unseen" dimension of depth. Because they're conveying the same thing, they do have to work somewhat in tandem. This means that as the convergence of your side edges gets more dramatic, forcing the scale of the far end down, it would also be making it proportionally wider so the shift in degree is also made to match. You don't have to worry about just how much wider you have to make it, just be sure to match extreme scale shifts with more extreme degree shifts.

Continuing onto your cylinders in boxes, your work here is progressing pretty well, and a lot of that comes down to your effective use of the line extensions. This exercise is really all about helping develop students' understanding of how to construct boxes which feature two opposite faces which are proportionally square, regardless of how the form is oriented in space. We do this not by memorizing every possible configuration, but rather by continuing to develop your subconscious understanding of space through repetition, and through analysis (by way of the line extensions).

Where the box challenge's line extensions helped to develop a stronger sense of how to achieve more consistent convergences in our lines, here we add three more lines for each ellipse: the minor axis, and the two contact point lines. In checking how far off these are from converging towards the box's own vanishing points, we can see how far off we were from having the ellipse represent a circle in 3D space, and in turn how far off we were from having the plane that encloses it from representing a square.

There's one thing I noticed on occasion though that you'll want to keep an eye on. When you're drawing your ellipses, always ensure that they're touching all four edges of the plane enclosing them first and foremost. That's your main priority, and then a close second is aiming to align to the correct minor axis direction. That ensures that the ellipse "describes" the plane, and that your minor axis is likely to be closer to correct. From there, that leaves only the degree to carry the bulk of any mistakes or issues that may result, which is closely related to the proportions of the plane itself.

Overall, you are mindful of this, but towards the end of the set I caught a number of cases - like 235, 236, 237, where this was slipping. 247 and 249 are also examples of this, but I think that they're more likely to have just been errors in execution, rather than in your actual intent, which is normal.

Anyway, all in all, solid work. I'll go ahead and mark this challenge as complete.

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Feel free to move onto Lesson 6.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
5:52 PM, Thursday April 11th 2024

Thanks for clarifying the priority of axis allignment vs touching all the sides - I was actually under the impression that the correct order was the reverse. I'll keep that in mind going forward.

I have a question about line extensions: I never quite figured out what the contact point lines were telling me. So, for example, in 231 and 232, it looks like the green and blue lines for the closer ellipse need to be moved clockwise and counterclockwise, respectively. What does that mean for the proportions of the plane that they're in? Do I need to make one of the sides longer or something like that?

Thanks for your help!

6:26 PM, Thursday April 11th 2024

If the minor axis is aligned, and your ellipse touches all four edges, then all you have left to adjust is the degree - so the width of the ellipse in the direction of the minor axis. Making the ellipse wider will shift/rotate the contact point lines in one direction, making the ellipse narrower will shift them in the other direction. Of course, in order to shift the degree, we have to adjust the proportions of the plane accordingly.

There's basically a lot of these different elements that relate to one another: the contact points are controlled by the degree, which is controlled by the proportions of the plane. The exercise has us explore so many different iterations because it helps flesh out our understanding of how changing those proportions will impact the resulting line extensions, and through plenty of iteration, that influences are underlying instincts in regards to what proportions are more square given a particular orientation for the box itself.

So, when you've completed a page and find yourself with line extensions telling you something's off, you would then go into the next page keeping that in mind and trying to experiment with changing the proportions a little in one direction, or another, to see how those impact the resulting line extensions.

The annoying part of it all is that the goal isn't for you to necessarily understand consciously which actions provide which results - we want to push past the conscious and rely on our subconscious to manage those calculations. This means a lot more repetition, but in the end it gives us the freedom to focus our conscious mind on what it is we wish to draw, rather than how it needs to be drawn to appear believably 3D.

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A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.

In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.

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