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3:04 AM, Wednesday August 26th 2020

Some ellipses look wobbly, this more apparent on the ellipses on planes.

In rough perspective 1 there's visible wobbling in the lines, not as much as on the second page.

The rotated boxes looks pretty spot on, great!

One thing I can suggest for ellipses is for you to start it at different points and/or changing the direction (clockwise, counter clockwise) to see which one tends to give out better results. This is the kind of thing you can do with a pencil, just to get a good feel of the alternatives.

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5:12 AM, Sunday August 30th 2020
edited at 5:16 AM, Aug 30th 2020

Lines

Really wobbly especially in the boxes, DRAW CONFIDENTLY. Straight strong lines first then work on accuracy

Ellipses

Also incredibly wobbly(refer back to lines) and sometimes in the funnel and plane exercise you drew on loop for your elipses. "Ellipses must be drawn through ellipses 2 to 3 times, (2 times preferably)"(drawabox critique guide).

Boxes

Same issue with lines, however your rotated boxes exercise is good. Also in organic perspective the beginning boxes are way too small, slowly increase the size otherwise the scale is thrown out of order.

Overall

Unfortunately you need to redo lesson 1 again, lesson 1 is to encourage confident strong lines and it seems like this isn't there.

edited at 5:16 AM, Aug 30th 2020
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12:45 AM, Thursday January 14th 2021

i think you should redo lesson 1.

READ the article thoroughly and understand the video

then start the exercise one by one..don't rush.

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