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2:02 PM, Saturday July 16th 2022
edited at 2:21 PM, Jul 18th 2022

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Your lines are confident enough although some of them have wobbles and archs make sure be confident and use your shoulder. The archs it can be fixed by trying to arch consciously to the opposite direction.

Make sure have warms ups.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier and also overshooting which is not bad, but some are not hitting starting and ending. Make you ghosted before making lines. And be mindful on hitting the start.

3.Ghosted Planes

Same as ghosted line but you improved by hitting the start and a few of undershooting.

You have repeated lines, kept the line as it if were correct and move on.

4.Tables of Ellipses

You drew your ellipses confidently. A bit deformed at times, but that will get better with more practice over time.

Some of the ellipse positions are off make sure you are hitting the corners and some of the ellipses are overlapping, ellipses should be kept within the bounds each.

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

Some of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that.

Some ellipses are slanting. You want to make sure that the central line of the funnel cuts each ellipse into symmetrical.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

Although your some of the hatching are undershorting.

And your ruler maybe clean with tissues or some clothes just to get rid of se ink.

8.Rough Perspective

The line of the are bit wobbles and you have repeating lines

the red line you put them on v.p using rulers. You must ruler to the horizon line of the box. This will show us a concrete idea of how far off we were.

it is okay if iy will be off it the intended VP but that's okay and normal

Make sure to re-read the homework to understand.

9.Rotated Boxes

Some lines are not confident

Make sure you do warm ups.

You did Great on the boxes. Some boxes especially the corners are not rotating and the gaps are not consistent.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident,

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall you really put a effort on it great job.

Next Steps:

1 page of Rough perspective make sure do not ruler to the VP, Just the horizontal line of the boxes and read again the homework and you will be good.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
edited at 2:21 PM, Jul 18th 2022
4:06 PM, Thursday July 21st 2022
1:44 AM, Friday July 22nd 2022

No, its the same.

Your page would look like.

https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/step6

DO NOT RULER THE VP AND BOXES

Just use ruler in the boxes towards the line of VP

Next Steps:

1 page of Rough perspective make sure do not ruler to the VP, Just the horizontal line of the boxes and read again the homework and you will be good.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
12:32 PM, Friday July 22nd 2022
edited at 12:47 PM, Jul 22nd 2022

Ok i got it, my bad

edited at 12:47 PM, Jul 22nd 2022
5:52 PM, Friday July 22nd 2022
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