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1:33 PM, Thursday August 20th 2020
Hello!
You lines look really good, although it seems that you tend to curve them a little bit when you start, especially on the ghosted lines exercise. However you showed some improvement on the last exercises!
The ellipses look good too, there are some that overlap eachother on the tables of ellipses, and on the funnel exercise there are some that don't look symmetrical (remember that the horizontal line should cut them in two symmetrical halves)
You did a great job on the perspective exercises! The organic one could have had a little more weigthline on some of the boxes, but other than that I think they are fine.
Good job!
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2:48 PM, Friday August 21st 2020
Hello!
Thanks a lot for the critique, I'll keep that in mind for the next lessons !
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