7:46 PM, Monday May 3rd 2021
While these are an improvement there's still a few things you can work on.
Keep trying to simplify your organic forms.
The tiny ellipse on the end is a contour line as well, you're currently drawing them so small they aren't particularly helpful in terms of conveying form. Remember we want to draw through all of our ellipses including these small ones.
Your contour curves are a a bit stiff and lacking confidence.
I'll be moving you on to lesson 3, keep practicing previous exercises as warm ups and good luck.
Next Steps:
Move on to lesson 3.