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10:46 PM, Friday December 23rd 2022

Hello I’ll be handling the critique for your lesson 3 homework.

Organic Arrows :

-Starting with the organic arrows you are doing some good attempts at the perspective of the ribbon and you’ve also drawn your marks with confidence. It seems that you are both aware of how the arrow gets wider as it moves closer to the viewer, and the fact that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon decreases as it moves further away. I don’t really have anything to call out here but keep aware of the negative space The main issue here though is that you are not aware that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon should decrease as it moves further away, as shown here ( https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/011d064f.jpg ), this is the only thing missing for your arrows to look tridimensional

Leaves

-Moving on to the leaves you are doing a good job with the first two steps, that is drawing the flow line and the edges for the silhouette. and one important step and that is drawing the edge details,

Branches :

-Moving on to the branches I think that you may followed the instructions as best as you could have.

there is not much to address here great job

daisy demo please make sure u close the leaf well and draw with flow line and the flow line need to be draw with confidancce and adhere to it

please include your ref images

excellent job move one but please 1 page arrow

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5:23 PM, Wednesday December 28th 2022

https://imgur.com/a/JQFVpOe

Thank you for the critique, here's my revision.

6:43 PM, Wednesday December 28th 2022

great job u did nice job but in the future push more the perspective i think u did great job well done

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