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2:44 PM, Tuesday June 22nd 2021

Hi this is my first official review after reading the discord critque rules.

Your lines look confident when superimposed and slightly woobly in line ghosting method. i think you may be drawing with your wrist some and it contorts the line at the end. Practice working from the shoulder and elbow.

Ellipses look good but when tilted at a 45 degree angle make sure the ellipses are touching each other like how you did with your funnel ellipses coming out of the corner.

Plotted perspective looks really good. In rough perspective i think you may have saw the x shape of the converging lines. The 250 box challenge should help. The rotated boxes looked really good and thoughtout. And the organic perspective looks good but i think you could have done a few more medium boxes and small boxes to.

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Looks well done. Next is 250 box challenge!

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6:06 PM, Sunday June 27th 2021

Thank you so much for taking the time to look over my work! :)

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