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1:39 PM, Thursday April 11th 2024

Hi!

Thank you so much for taking time to review my lesson.. I didn’t expect someone would. I can’t describe how much it means to me and keeps me motivated.

Below I’m attaching the link to the organic perspective revision! Let me know your thoughts and thanks once again in advance.

https://imgur.com/GDkXpVQ

4:28 AM, Friday April 12th 2024
edited at 5:33 AM, Apr 12th 2024

No problem!

Your boxes seem to be rotating a lot more so good job with that, and hopefully with the 250 box challenge you'll have an even better grasp on how boxes work in 3d space! However I do still see some repeating lines, which I mentioned in the line section of your critique, if you are trying to fix a mistake with your line by drawing a new line over the "mistake" line, it's best to just leave the line as is and move on (Of course that excludes the Superimposed lines exercise, since you are "repeating" the lines in that exercise to build confidence). Besides that, good job on completing Lesson 1 and good luck with the 250 box challenge!

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edited at 5:33 AM, Apr 12th 2024
3:03 PM, Friday April 12th 2024

Thank you! I’ll be moving towards the 250 box challenge and I’ll take your advice into account more

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