Hi Asfiruu! Let's go over each section from your submission.
Lines
Your superimposed lines are mostly smooth & confidently drawn, not to mention there are no fraying on starting position. Long lines can use some practice though.
Nice work on doing your ghosted lines smoothly & having them meet the other end. Ghosted planes turned out great thanks to them.
Ellipses
Your ellipses are smooth, drawn over multiple times & touches their goals in table of ellipses & funnels. After completing a page in table of ellipses, be sure to fill all of the empty space with small ellipses, more practice is never bad.
Good job in keeping the ellipses in planes within the bounds of the planes, they missed some of the expected goals but accuracy will improve over time.
Boxes
You forgot to plot back edges for many boxes in plotted perspective. Please keep them in mind when doing this exercise in warm ups, also plot them in this page.
Your boxes in rough perspective are drawn as instructed, they're nearly converging toward their vanishing point.
You seem to understand the boxes in 3d space as I saw in your rotated boxes. Couple of things you can keep in mind is to only gradually rotated the boxes & keep gaps between all of them nearly equals.
You've conveyed the depths in frames of organic perspective.
Your boxes are sometime diverging from their vanishing points in last 2 exercises, you can greatly improve on this when doing the box challenge.
Overall you've done theses exercises as intended. Congrats! on completing lesson 1.
Next Steps:
Feel free to move on to 250 Box Challenge. Keep doing exercises from lesson 1 in warm ups & if some exercises take too much time, do just a portion of them.
Thank you for the feedback! I'll try to practice more and doing warm up when I do the boxes challenge!
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).
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