12:58 AM, Wednesday February 2nd 2022
Hey there, it's definitely been a bit but I'm glad to see you're back.
Overall these are much better than your original submission which is great.
There are times when your lines converge in pairs or you attempt to keep your lines a bit too parallel which results in them diverging. This is an example of lines converging in pairs, and this shows the relation between each line in a set and their respective vanishing point. The inner pair of lines will be quite similar unless the box gets quite long and the outer pair can vary a lot depending on the location of the vanishing point. Move it further away and the lines become closer to parallel while moving it closer increases the rate of foreshortening.
As long as you keep those facts in mind and keep practicing you'll continue to see improvement.
I'll be marking your submission complete and moving you on to lesson 2.
Keep practicing previous exercises and boxes as warm ups and good luck.
Next Steps:
Move on to lesson 2.