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7:51 PM, Thursday March 23rd 2023
Hello! Congrats on finishing your first lesson!
Lines: Your lines look pretty good, you have done very well with them! They're not very wobbly and I don't see a lot of fraying or arching. You do repeat your lines sometimes (especially in the organic perspective assignment), but I can see that it's rather rare.
Ellipses: Your ellipses look good, although you should try to make them touch each other and stay within the borders. I'm sure you could fit a lot more ellipses in your assignments that way! I also think that you have become more confident in drawing them as you have progressed through the exercises. Well done.
Boxes: Your boxes look good. You used the correction method right in the rough perspective assignment. Good job on the rotated boxes, they look really clean! You don't have to worry about the organic perspective assignment either, because you'll have plenty of time to practise perspective.
I think that's about it. There's no need for any revisions, but next time you submit your homework, make sure that each page is in the correct order. I personally find it much easier to check homework when it's organised properly. I'm sure whoever is going to be checking your next lesson (especially the 250 box challenge) will appreciate it too.
Next Steps:
Head onto the 250 Box Challenge! Good luck!
8:27 AM, Saturday March 25th 2023
Thank you for reviewing my homework I will keep your feed back in mind while moving further!
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