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11:08 PM, Tuesday September 13th 2022

Hello Abh, congrats on completing lesson1

Your line work is clean and confident with a a few Exceptions in rough perspective, where you seemed to have hesitated on your lines for the sake of accuracy, just remember to ghost and follow through in one stroke even if you are doing a “Drawing” or going for accuracy, but overall really good job on the lines and the perspective exercises .

Your circles and ellipses, however seem to be lacking consistency, and are tilting weirdly in the ghosted planes exercise, to be honest this something I am still struggling with so I do not want to give bad advice l, however ellipses need to be treated like everything else , ghosted and followed through with confidence.

I will ask you to do one page of ghostedplanes with circles and you should be Golden to tackle the 250box challenge.

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1 page of ghosted planes with ellipses

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
10:13 PM, Thursday September 15th 2022

Still having issues

https://imgur.com/a/p5R7yYS

2:01 AM, Friday September 16th 2022

No problem, it takes practices take a look at the notes on lesson 1 on ellipses and circles and remember to practice them as a warm up.

Next Steps:

250box challenge

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12:15 AM, Monday September 19th 2022

Ok thank you

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