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3:09 PM, Thursday December 24th 2020

Contours:

OK

Arrows:

most of them are tilted weirdly, try to get second line aligned to the top one similarly on all turns, it might be easier to do few arrows where you draw curve -> height lines -> curve instead of 2 curves then height

Texture: yeah it's hard one though I think it's good enough as of Lesson 2

Static intersections:

this exercise is very hard, you can try getting some free 3D software (like Blender) or finding some online tool to check how simple forms intersections look like cause now your intersection line does not belong to both forms surfaces in most places, though it was not the main goal of the lesson keep this in mind for future lessons

Organic intersection:

sausages look like they're weightless and float above each other just touching, try to make them wrap around other ones, like the center line and sausage itself should follow the cross-contour of the sausage below it

I suggest you practice Arrows/ribbons and organic intersections before moving on (you will need this knowledge to draw leaves and fungus in the next lessons)

Next Steps:

Redo arrows and organic intersections homework

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7:29 PM, Saturday January 2nd 2021
edited at 7:30 PM, Jan 2nd 2021
Hi! Thank you for the critique. Here is more pages of organic intersctions and arrows, I've took some time to practices and do more than a few and now I do feel more comfortable seeing them. Not sure if its perfect but I guess theyre better :D https://imgur.com/a/oBATbVb 
edited at 7:30 PM, Jan 2nd 2021
5:43 PM, Saturday January 16th 2021

They are way better than before, I think you can move on to lesson 3

Next Steps:

Lesson 3

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