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4:26 PM, Sunday May 16th 2021
edited at 4:34 PM, May 16th 2021

i feel like you didn't really understand the funnels exercise i would like it if you were to go back and try it again, be sure to pay attention to the text!

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edited at 4:34 PM, May 16th 2021
12:04 AM, Thursday May 20th 2021

https://imgur.com/a/CTFUk92

Here's my second try for the funnels. You don't have to tell me that the middle one is bad lol

3:20 PM, Friday May 21st 2021

much better

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