3:53 AM, Wednesday March 23rd 2022
Thank you so much for the feedback.
About the cutting into the forms, I think I do that to either break the silhouette or show the fleshy part that is inside the construction, or to hide my mistakes(I admit & I'll try to avoid it).
The revision: https://imgur.com/a/SIpqQF6
The first animal was done two days ago(long after submitting for the critique), I think I'ved followed most of your advice here.
The second animal(elephant) was done after getting the critique(took 2 hr approx). The middle portion of the trunk got messier considering I kept adding mass on the side of it.
I can do another animal tomorrow if you want(since you're limiting me to one animal per day).
Again thanks for the feedback.