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5:57 PM, Friday September 4th 2020

On the first few pages your lines looked good and you have improved your circles as well. Though i recommend still working on your circles during warmups.

One thing i noticed is that you completely missed the point of what the exercise on Rough Perspective should teach you. You dont (entirely?) understand VPs. Your red lines should go exactly to the VP, read the lesson again here and draw another page of rough perspective.

The rest looks great. I'll consider this lesson done once you draw another rough perspective page and post it here. Good luck

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12:54 AM, Monday October 5th 2020

I would agree that the Rough Perspective exercise had a few boxes that were quite off. Another page would be helpful to reinforce the concept.

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