11:20 PM, Saturday July 10th 2021
I'm also very new to this and only just finished lesson 1, so I only really feel qualified to give you very general feedback - But your lines look REALLY confident, mostly. In fact in some of the 2 page exercises, your first pass looks even a little smoother/ better than your 2nd page.
Next Steps:
If I had to suggest any re-do, and I'm not sure it's needed, I would say try one frame of rough perspective again.
Your whole submission looks really nice to me, but rough perspective is the only exercise that looks like your lines are more wobbly and less confident.
I'm so impressed. Nicely done.