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12:53 PM, Thursday June 25th 2020

Try to rotate the page more so that you can draw more comfortably, when ghosting do that just in one direction several times.

It seems like you ghosted back and forth in the superimposed lines exercise.

Try to get your ellipses as packed as possible, I saw a few floating along.

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It would be better to redo the superimposed lines exercise, to better his understanding of ghosting

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
1:20 AM, Tuesday June 30th 2020

https://imgur.com/gallery/1Nb1MdB here is the Redo of the exercises you gave me, thanks a lot, i hope this time was better

9:34 AM, Tuesday June 30th 2020

Yup, lines are smooth and consistent, you can now develop your confidence through the exercise

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You can go on with the 250 box challenge, good luck!

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