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4:37 PM, Monday July 13th 2020

Yup- well done!

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Next, let’s have the vanishing points be just off the page. Not so far off that the lines are parallel, or even close to parallel, just barely off the page. What this means is that you won’t (or rather, can’t) plot or label your VPs, but you will still visualize them. Give me one page of these boxes.

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7:15 PM, Tuesday July 14th 2020
6:44 AM, Thursday July 16th 2020
edited at 6:45 AM, Jul 16th 2020

Hmmm.

Box 285 is well done. The lines all converge to their respective vanishing points, which are further off than last time, though still dramatic. The other boxes have a mixture of mistakes, some new, some old. Box 281, for instance, has its vanishing points on the page, quite close to itself, too (new mistake.) Conversely, boxes 283 and 284 have some lines that seem ignore them entirely, like the blue lines on the former, and the red lines on the latter (old mistake, which I thought we’d fixed.) I’m, in all honestly, not 100% sure on how to go about fixing this, so what I’ll recommend you do is move on to lesson 2, but continue practicing these in your spare time. I’ll further recommend sticking to dramatic foreshortening (even plotting the vanishing points down, if you wish) until comfortable, before moving on to more shallow foreshortening. Do so gradually, too. Good luck.

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edited at 6:45 AM, Jul 16th 2020
12:59 AM, Friday July 17th 2020

i appreciate all the time you've spent helping me out. i can notice things ive messed up after ive drawn it but i have a really hard time knowing how long to make a line or what angle to make it before i have drawn it. if you have any tips on this that would be super. how many boxes would you recommend i should draw daily until i get it down?

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