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7:56 PM, Tuesday May 5th 2020

That is definitely a considerable improvement. I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

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Feel free to move onto lesson 3.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
8:10 PM, Tuesday May 5th 2020

Thanks. Anything I need to improve from this batch?

12:06 AM, Wednesday May 6th 2020

It's a big improvement and moving in the right direction, but there is still plenty of room for growth. I expect that as you continue to practice these exercises as part of your regular warmups, you'll continue to improve your sausage forms and making them more consistent (there are a few that are a little off but not nearly as much as before), and that you'll continue fighting against the urge to correct your mistakes (in your form intersections).

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Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.

Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.

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