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7:37 AM, Tuesday January 12th 2021

Your superimposed lines start out very confident. I think you did well avoiding wobbling, and the fraying seems pretty natural. For the curves you did fine as well. Moving onto your ghosted lines, I think theyre confident as well. They're landing close to their points. They fall short or overshoot here and there, but I think with practice youll get that down. The ghosted planes are very good. The lines are pretty accurate and straight. It feels like you have solid control over them.

Your ellipses in planes are good as well. On a couple your circles it seems you only rounded them once. Try slowing down and making sure you don't dismiss move through the ellipses to fast. Your ellipses in planes seem have pretty ok control of fitting in the planes but the rounds are sometimes only reaching one in a half here and there but its not really any problem here. The strokes makes it seem like your going a little fast with your marks, which may contribute to less accuracy. Your funnels here are good just that same thing with the one and a half rounds especially on your larger ellipses.

Your plotted perspective had the points a little close, and very few boxes but you seemed to understand the exercise. I I hope you are comfortable with overlap at this point and got enough practice plotting points in 2 dimensions if not, then Id recommend practicing this exercise a little more. Your rough perspective seems to be having problems on the technical and comprehensive side of things. You have lines that are supposed to stay consistently vertical at a slant, especially for the boxes that are having a more drastic perspective. I think you should go through the reading and maybe watch the demo lesson and try again. Make sure you practice them in your warm-ups. Your rotated boxes seem good and a fair attempt at rotating the boxes, but they just dont reach a full range of motion and remain pretty forward, almost three-quarter, facing. Your rotating boxes are good, just the diverging on many of them instead of converging, which may be due to previous lessons.

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I think you should practice a little more plotted perspective and redo the rough perspective exercises. Rough perspective seems a little misunderstood. From there maybe try just one or two sections of rotated boxes, and work on focus on diverging there.

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3:23 PM, Sunday January 17th 2021

Thank you so much for the feedback. I have redone the Rough Perspective exerciese you can find them in the link below. I didn't even see this untill after I did the 250 box challange and that took forever. I do believe my understnading with prosective as improved immensely thanks to it. Also just wanted to make sure that when I do the the rotated boxes you just want me to do one or two of them not including the center one. Thank you again for the help.

https://imgur.com/a/tNVQ8I3

11:11 PM, Monday January 18th 2021

I think one rotated boxes will be fine just to show you understand.

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