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4:45 AM, Sunday May 31st 2020
edited at 7:19 AM, May 31st 2020

Congrats on finishing Lesson 1, however you seem to missing quite a few exercises. While you may be working on a bigger space these lessons ask for pages. Your pages may be larger but several exercises look like they wouldn't fill up a regular sized page.

I'll critique what I can but you'll need those missing pages in order to complete this lesson.

Superimposed Lines: Consistent work but lacking in quanity. More lines of different length will give you the muscle memory you need for future work

Ghosted LInes: Nice work, some wobbling and few missed lines but overall good stuff.

Ghosted Planes: Striaght lines mostly, but a quite a few seem to be too short or too far from their mark. Not much to ananlyze with only one page however.

Table of Ellipses: Good job keeping your ellipses together, but a few seem to be messier than others. Remember to draw through your ellipses two to three times. It's not really a suggestion but more of a demand of all your ellipses.

Ellipses in Planes: Decent work; Try to fill the sides of the plane and remember to draw through your ellipses.

Funnels: Good job drawing through your ellipses. Not too much wobbling on the minor axis so nice work.

Plotted Perspective: Missing this exercise.

Rough perspective: Solid work keeping your vertical and horizontal lines straight. Otherwise some issues lining up the lines with the VP but I think you understood the objective.

Rotated Boxes: Very clean attempt. Somewhat smaller which hinders your ability to picture the boxes in 3D but you have good rotation.

Organic Perspective: This is a hard one. You did a nice job giving depth to the second frame. The biggest issue I see is that the planes of your boxes don't line up well. Remember the Y shape you start with gives you all the lines that the rest will line up with.

Next Steps:

I recommend you do another page of ghosted planes with ghosted ellipses. Draw through your ellipses and try to touch all the sides of the plane.

Please add a page of the Plotted perspective, alongside one of Organic Perspective. These exercises will help you better understand VPs in a 3D space which will help once you move onto the 250 Box Challenge.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
edited at 7:19 AM, May 31st 2020
5:04 PM, Sunday May 31st 2020
edited at 5:08 PM, May 31st 2020

thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback, very much appreciated. I'll make sure to do a second page where requested. I did the plotted perspective lesson but looks like there was an upload error. I uploaded it to my sketchbook right now.

the organic perspectives exercise was a mess, but im feeling a lot better about rotating boxes now that im on the 250 box challenge, that video was very helpful.

thanks again!

edited at 5:08 PM, May 31st 2020
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