11:44 AM, Monday June 28th 2021
Hello,
good job finishing Lesson 2! Here's some tips for the future:
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Contour curves - ellipses degrees do not vary (they should vary similarly as contour ellipses cause the curve is just visible part of the ellipse)
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organic intersection - I thinks some cast shadows are missing? (mainly forms in second picture top left, and first form on gorund plane)
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intersections - as line weight is only on cuts sometimes it gets a bit confusing visually - you could add a bit of line weight on intersecting lines to show which ones are in front
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arrows could use a bit of line weight too
Good luck in your art journey!
Next Steps:
Lesson 3