Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
11:37 PM, Tuesday January 12th 2021
any critique is highly appreciated .Thank you soo much
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7:26 PM, Saturday January 16th 2021
This is amazing.
Some feedback I can actually give is to try rotating your box in the organic perspective exercise a little more. For the most part, they all seem like they're in the same orientation as one another.
Something else that you can work on is to improve on the ellipses being more enclosed in the ghosted planes, though that's more of a nitpick.
Your superimposed lines fray a lot at the ends, so you can practice reducing the fraying ends.
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Good luck on the 250 box challenge, and the rest of Drawabox! I'd' recommend working on the Lesson 1 concepts by practicing their exercises as warmup for about 10-20 minutes.
3:42 AM, Sunday January 17th 2021
thank you sooo much really helpful critique i do the warmups everyday for 15-20 mins (gotta start doing the superimpsoed lines though..i am doing the other exercises) and i got better than before at rotating the boxes because i am doing the 250 boxes challenge.
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