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5:26 PM, Saturday July 2nd 2022

Hello

  • lines : overall confident and continuously smooth line , but some of the lines curve a little and are not as confident.

  • a few of the eclipses undershoots the line that supposed to touch by a bit , so some ellipses warm-up in the future I think will help.

  • overall I think you understood the purpose of exercises and preformed accordingly .

And I think you're ready for the next challenge.

i also need some critics on my assignments to move to the challenge, please help me with that.

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250 boxes challenge

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6:38 PM, Monday July 4th 2022

Thank you for the critique! I notice that you have the 2 people agree, which means you're ready to move on. Would you still like a critique? If not, I'll pay attention to the next time you post and give you a critique then!

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2:45 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022

-The ellipses should touch all four sides of the quadrilateral which yours don't.

-the lines are a little wobbly.

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