From what I can see that album only contains one page of form intersections. Did you forget to include the second page there?
not sure why the other page didnt upload
Your linework has definitely improved. Admittedly the pages are still a little lazy (lots of empty space) but the way in which you've drawn each individual mark has definitely gotten much better, so that's a significant step in the right direction. There's still more room for improvement here, but I'll leave that for you to practice on your own.
Just one side note, aside from the fact that you really should have worked more forms into each individual page to fill up the space. I noticed that on the first page of the two, the box in the center was drawn especially poorly - be sure to think about how each line you draw needs to be oriented to converge more consistently with all three lines it shares a vanishing point with. With this box, the orientation of your lines appears to have been more arbitrary. The box on the second page is somewhat better in this regard.
With all of these drawings, there is a lot to think about - you've shown here that you're able to approach it with more patience and care than you did before, but the hope is that you will continue to approach it with more and more patience.
Next Steps:
Move onto lesson 3.
A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.
In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.
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