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7:37 PM, Friday January 15th 2021

on the rough perspective exercise, you wanted to plot your red lines to where the box convergence lines actually went, instead of where they should have went. You get more information by how well or poorly you did on estimating your convergence lines that way. Nice sizing on your organic perspective exercise, you can see the depth of the scene. Its up to you whether or not to redo the rough perspective so you can plot your lines the correct way, or you could just use a different color pen if you wanted.

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7:18 PM, Saturday January 16th 2021

For the rough perspective exercise, you were supposed to take the depth lines(the lines that are supposed to converge to the vanishing point), and link them to the horizon line. The idea is supposed to show that "close enough" can be sufficient.

Next Steps:

I think you only really need to work on the ghosting method for line making and perspective. You can do these as warmups prior to any instructional exercise you're following, or even just before drawing, and not even for a long period of time.

Other than that, get started on the 250 box challenge! I wish you luck on both that, and the rest of Drawabox!

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3:50 AM, Sunday January 17th 2021

Totally agree on ghosting method warmups. Sometimes, I leave drawing for too long and come back to it.

Thanks for the critique mate!

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