You made it aniterril!. we can see that you had put a lot of focus,energy and time in completing the challenge. so your work came out beautiful well done!.alrighty! lets roll the intro:

Hello aniterril! I'm chiran and I decided to check your submission and offer my insights on your work. these are the name given specifically because of their order and to represent the specific section of the boxes

Newbies - ( 1-100 boxes) 2. Intermediates - (101-200 boxes) and 3. pros - ( 201- 250 boxes)

okay lets analyze your work by breaking into three parts.

PART 1: THE PRAISES ( The job you did well in the challenge)

  • checking the mistakes: you did a great job by checking the boxes convergences by extending the lines aways from the viewer.by identifying where it went wrong, you did able to construct the boxes which has some good amount of convergences. ( like we can see on intermediates and pros) so hats off for that!

  • I can say that you are building a sense of confidence and patience in drawing your boxes by plotting down the starting and end points of the lines before executing, so thats good job!

  • while line weight and hatching is optional in this challenge, I'm glad to see that you are beginning to build the sense of form ( in this case box) using these tool.I can say that you prioritized confidence over perfection even while drawing those lines.so good job!

  • I like your way of experimenting with your boxes.you did take time to construct various types of boxes with different orientation, proportion and foreshortening throughout this challenge so thats great!

  • How are your lines? : your lines are awesome, they are smooth, confident and are ghosted before they are drawn so thats good job.

  • You got some pretty decent amount of convergence on the intermediates and pros so good job on that too!.

PART 2: WHERE IT WENT SLIGHTLY OFF? ( Where you should keep an eye on) ( No worries part!)

In this part I will just point out where it went slightly off. In the coming part I will explain how to avoid them and how you can improve them. I made this part because It will make our brain to remind us where we are going wrong and it will thereby make us conscious about our mistakes while drawing those boxes.

  • some set of lines in the boxes diverge a little instead of converging. although they are in minority, you should watch out for this next time while doing warm ups.

  • your line work has improved throughout this challenge thats good! but still you have treat every lines with respect even hatching and super imposed lines and ghost them before executing.because ghosting job will make our mind to think what we are doing and how this line holds a specific value in this box.

  • of course you had improved throughout the challenge but there are times where some of the set of lines converges at a faster rates than the others resulting in converging in pairs. this point you can definitely work on, in your warm ups.

  • It's completely and totally normal to have the back corner line slightly off compared to the rest. you should try and work on those as well. they have significantly improved at end of your work so nice job!

  • lastly, I would suggest you to practice some very extreme foreshortening boxes in your warm ups thinking the vps are very close to the boxes.because I can see some very few on your work.

PART 3: THE JOB WE CAN DO TO IMPROVE OUR BOXES IN OUR WARM UPS:

  • You're making good progress towards understanding the concepts introduced in this challenge, below I'll be listing some things that will hopefully help you in your future attempts at these boxes.

  • I believe that you are understanding the concept of perspective very well. but still I will leave a note here so that you can come back at any time to review the notes:

notes:

related to diverging lines : according to the rule of perspective; All the parallel line in the 3D world( real world) will appear to converge to a specific VP on a 2d page. so what we can say is ,our parallel lines should always converge as a set not in pairs and they will never diverge from the VP as this will broke the rule of perspective.So next time, instead of drawing parallel lines in the boxes, mention your conscious mind that the parallel lines in the 3d world of box will always converge to a specific vp( vanishing point). these vps can either be staying inside the page ( creating more dramatic boxes)or outside of it ( creating shallow boxes) https://imgur.com/mWLlnYl

if your aware of this rule then you need to build mileage by including 1-2 boxes in your daily warm up routine.

THE INNER CORNER PARADOX: In this challenge, we are estimating where our lines going to converge to a point. as we are humans, it is almost impossible to perfectly estimate where our lines will going to converge thereby resulting in an error. this error will continue to accumulate as we construct the box freely rotated in space. finally this accumulated error will be thrown to the back corner. So its pretty normal to have the inner back corner come out pretty off.

I want to take a look at this info here;https://i.imgur.com/8PqQLE0.png

In this image we can know that how each line will behave relating to the position from its neighbouring edges and the VP.So we can arrive at the conclusion that, If the distance between the internal edges and external edges gets reduce more and more they will eventually become parallel to one and another. Alternatively If the distance between the internal corner and the external grow more and more the internal line will also converge.you can also try and start from the back corner if the box is narrower.https://imgur.com/a/DHlA3Jh

these diagram can be pretty hard to understand at first, so if you don't understand it, don't get frustrated, keep reading it from time to time while practicing regularly, and it will click eventually.

if your aware of these notes, then you need to build mileage by including 1-2 boxes in your daily warm up routine. after that your boxes will get better and better and will eventually make you happy at the end. :D

MY POINT OF VIEW:

we all know, this challenge was very intimidating because of constructing 250 boxes arbitrarily rotated in 3d and yet you did a great job by keeping persistent till the end with lots of effort, focus, energy and time so hats off for that.

" A BOX A DAY KEEP YOUR ISSUES AWAY"

Yes, We've come to the end of this feedback. overall, this was a solid submission Your submission reveals that you did take time to read through the lesson materials, followed the instructions and executed to your best of your ability. so that's good job!..thank you for submitting your assignment to the community I will mark this challenge as complete.

Yippee! You have completed this challenge. congratulations!. I hope this feedback helps . Have a wonderful artistic journey

Thank you aniterril.