(Not native speaker)
Lines:
1 and 2 "Fraying on both ends". I notice that you have many lines in which none of the line's endings seems to alling. "The student should place the pen carefully at the beginning of each line so this does not happen"
3 and 4 "Wobble in lines". You don't seem to be doing confident lines, I have the idea that you are movinf the pen slowly, but is better if you just draw it, don't worry so much about accuracy. Better in 5.
Ellipses
General "Ellipses must be drawn through ellipses 2 to 3 times". I noticed that many ellipses you've drawn don't look as if you had drawn through before and just started doing the ellipse.
Boxes
General "Wobble in lines" Same as in Lines
Rotated boxes is a mess, Most boxes don't rotate they are just changing sizes, as well I notice you didn't pay attention on the quantity of boxes, bellow there are 3 lines, above there are 5, when the exercise said you only needed to do 2, I'll tell you to pay more attention to what is written in the exercise for this not to happen again.
Congrats, you've finished the fist lesson!
Thank you so much for the great advice i will be sure to work on them. In your Opinion should i start the 250 box challenge or work on these issues and then start it ?
Hi, I'm a beginner too, so Im nit going to comment on everything you've done so far but only one thing. I think you should work more on your lines. I think you dont make them with your shoulder as they are still a bit wobly. I still strugle with it myself;)
Next Steps:
Work more on your lines using your shoulder more.
I agree, Try to ensure that your lines are not wobbly. Be confident when you are doing your line work and don't hesitate too much even if it is at the expense of accuracy. If you want, you can try to use the exercises in lesson as warm up for your line work before moving on.
This is a remarkable little pen. Technically speaking, any brush pen of reasonable quality will do, but I'm especially fond of this one. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
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