2:15 PM, Friday April 9th 2021
Hi WhiteofNottheSea, I've checked your submission.
So, good job on completing the challenge, I can see a lot of progression through your work, your boxes got more confident and you start hitting more convergences. Though there is still room for improvement.
First off, I'm seeing that you are haveng trouble with the back corner, so try this method of construction next time you are warming up with some boxes.
On big thing that you are not consistently doing during the challenge is applying line weight on the silhouette of your boxes. Now, line weight is tool we have to clarify how our forms sit and relate to each other in 3d space, in this case, by highlighting the silhouette of our boxes we are showing to the viewer how that box is facing them. Here it is explained on the challenge page.
I'm noticing that in a lot of cases you are repeating lines to correct them, try to fight this urge- One on side, it just makes everything more messy, and also, you should learn to stick to your mistakes.
Lastly, one thing that you can do to guess more accurately the convergence of the lines you are putting down is taking into account the relationships between all the lines on a set of parallels. By seeing how other lines converge in relation to each other, you are guessing more accurately than just comparing it with one, check this diagram and don't worry if it doesn't make sense, it's a little confusing but it will click eventually.
Overall, you did a very good job on this challenge, so I'm gonna go ahead and mark it as completed! Keep it up.
Next Steps:
Feel free to move on to lesson 2.