First time using Imgur so if the images don't show up let me know and I'll post the album to the community instead of using the share link.
Thank you guys for setting up this website, it's a great and friendly community with people that take time to critique and help people like me improve :)
Hello Deserthobo,
The album works fine
Lines
Superimposed lines are a bit wobbly and some arching as well, also remember to place your pen carefully at the begining of each line https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/1585f266.jpg
Ghosted lines are better, they still wobble but much less and the enfasis on confidance is notisable.
Elpises
The lines that make up your plane lost the confidance the ghosted lines had, it seems you focused more on accuracy than fluidity. Remember it doesnt matter if you over or under shoot your line as long as you are confident about it. The elipses on the other hand seem pretty confidant, in some of them you do still focus too much on touching the edges and make the elipses look more suare like, avoid this.
Table looks good, remember to ghost your elipses.
Realy like the funnels, you kept the elipses aligned as well as mantaining fluidity on your lines, good job.
Boxes
Rotated boxes look very nice there is some minor miss alignment on some corners but over all a really good attempt.
Organic perspective is also very nice.
Conclusion
Over all a really good lesson one, main thing i notices is you tend to sacrifice confidance over accuracy when dealing with solid shapes, like boxes or squares, keep this in mind moving forward and remember that over or undershooting is not an issua and confidance should come fist, accuracy will develop with time.
Next Steps:
Forward to 250 Box challenge, good luck and dont burn out. Remember 50 50 rule :)
Thanks for the critique! I'll be sure to draw the shapes with more confidence.
Hey! the images don't show up
Hello! Maybe try again? I've sent the link to my friends who don't have imgur and they could see it fine. The people on reddit could also see it so maybe you should try refreshing I really don't know what is happening.
This recommendation is really just for those of you who've reached lesson 6 and onwards.
I haven't found the actual brand you buy to matter much, so you may want to shop around. This one is a "master" template, which will give you a broad range of ellipse degrees and sizes (this one ranges between 0.25 inches and 1.5 inches), and is a good place to start. You may end up finding that this range limits the kinds of ellipses you draw, forcing you to work within those bounds, but it may still be worth it as full sets of ellipse guides can run you quite a bit more, simply due to the sizes and degrees that need to be covered.
No matter which brand of ellipse guide you decide to pick up, make sure they have little markings for the minor axes.
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