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9:31 AM, Tuesday September 1st 2020

  1. Lines- Your lines flow pretty smoothly so no complaints.

  2. Ellipses- Your ellipses don't have a defined structure, I'd suggest going over them a little more, from what I can see, there's a lack of confidence.

  3. Boxes- No complaints.

Next Steps:

Do the funnels exercise as a regular warmup, aim for a more gradual change in structure.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
6:33 PM, Wednesday September 2nd 2020

Thanks for taking the time to check my work.

I redid the funnel exercise a few times.

https://imgur.com/gallery/iy5fY50

2:57 AM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

You can definitely move on now

Next Steps:

Move on to 250 boxes

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