6:31 PM, Tuesday July 12th 2022
https://imgur.com/a/oIgJMD4 here i have a problem with not using my shoulder for little details
https://imgur.com/a/oIgJMD4 here i have a problem with not using my shoulder for little details
flow for each leaf is pretty good,
good attempts for leaf number 1,5, however 5's left edge seems to be zigzagging,
you've worked subtractively instead of additively in leaves 9 & 4
some zigzagging in leaf 3
for branches
a bit better from your previous work, good attempt for 1, 3 & 7.
one thing to point out is that you are often repeating a line(lines that you try to correct/ don't mind/ not serve any purpose on the page); like in branches 6 & 2.
another thing is that when you're forking branches: https://drawabox.com/lesson/3/2/forking instead of drawing 2 ellipses in both sides, you draw 1 ball and then draw an ellipse then a flow line in the side you wish to add a branch.
so i won't hold you any longer, since the problem seems to lessen. one thing that i'm a bit worried is the case of you repeating a line since i've checked your previous submissions and they're present throughout each lesson so you may bring it along as you progress through lesson 4 and above.
you surely did improve but there are still a lot of things that you can improve, i'll be completing this submission and if you can, keep the points that i've rasied in mind.
Next Steps:
move on-to lesson 4
ok ill keep in mind everything you said, thank you ver much
This recommendation is really just for those of you who've reached lesson 6 and onwards.
I haven't found the actual brand you buy to matter much, so you may want to shop around. This one is a "master" template, which will give you a broad range of ellipse degrees and sizes (this one ranges between 0.25 inches and 1.5 inches), and is a good place to start. You may end up finding that this range limits the kinds of ellipses you draw, forcing you to work within those bounds, but it may still be worth it as full sets of ellipse guides can run you quite a bit more, simply due to the sizes and degrees that need to be covered.
No matter which brand of ellipse guide you decide to pick up, make sure they have little markings for the minor axes.
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