3:21 PM, Thursday July 7th 2022
Hi, Junnie!
Thank you very much for reviewing my work! Sorry for responding this late :( I fully agree with critique and I've myself noticed many gaps in my learning. I will try include more weak point in my warm-ups. Also, I re-did funnel exercise as you asked, here it is - https://imgur.com/a/D6ZWL9H This time I have tried to consider my previous mistakes, although I think I couldn't avoided some of them. Thanks again for your respond, it was helpful and important to me :)