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7:57 PM, Wednesday June 30th 2021

I think you did pretty good overall. Your lines are clean throughout, including your hatching. Your line orientation is off, especially with the inner corners, but that's to be expected. My main critique is that maybe you could have tried to have a bit more variety in your boxes. You could have tried having a few more with more extreme foreshortening, just for practice. Also, you maybe could have tried out different orientations of the cube (check out this Imgur: https://imgur.com/Kqg6uMX). But those are minor complaints. I think you're ready to head on to Lesson 2. Good job and good luck!

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3:49 AM, Saturday July 3rd 2021

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated.

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