5:02 PM, Tuesday July 6th 2021
Lines:
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seeing a lot of fraying at the start of lines in the superimposed exercise, especially with the curved lines. try to focus on starting at the exact same point each time
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ghosted lines exercise is missing
Ellipses:
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good job remembering to draw through each ellipse
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a lot of the ones drawn in your ghosted planes are angled so they're hitting two corners, they should be straight on so they hit all four sides of the plane
Boxes:
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plotted perspective lines should be plotted all the way back to the vanishing points. the last frame of that page has the boxes going to a bunch of different vanishing points which is not correct for the exercise, they should all go to the same 2 points like your first frames
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rough perspective and organic perspective lines are a bit wobbly, remember to draw confidently
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rotated boxes exercise has been shaded in pretty dark and it's hard to evaluate the drawn through areas
Next Steps:
Add the missing ghosted lines exercise and maybe redo the rotated boxes larger/don't shade so dark. Nobody's expecting it to be perfect but it's hard to critique when it's so condensed.
