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6:35 PM, Wednesday July 8th 2020

Thank you so much for your critique!

I did the funnels exercise again: https://imgur.com/a/Pb97XHU

I still find it a little difficult, because I don't really know how much the degree should change, but hopefully I did better this time.

6:57 PM, Thursday July 9th 2020

Yes your ellipses are definitely a lot better and cleaner. The amount that degree increases is arbitrary so you don't have to worry. You only need to show that the ellipses degrees are increasing here but for future reference you should try to control how much the degree changes from now on.

Again, well done.

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