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3:44 PM, Friday April 22nd 2022

(I copy this part from my previous feedback because its the same problem). This is not a big problem really, but next time I think you should submit your homework in order, especially the 250 boxes, it would be really hard to see your progress if u dont sort it.

Next time you should move the camera closer also, its really hard to see the lines with minimum contrast and small image

Lines: I can see your progress with lines, at first your lines were curvy and then it got straighter as you go forward to next exercises, but its nice I can see you always drew with your shoulder from the first exercise. I like your curvature lines too. I can see some lines correction which is not good if your doing drawabox because they prioritize confidence, so keep that in mind.

Ellipses: Ellipses looks nice, you draw through them twice, I can see some squiggly hand movement there but i think its a matter of practice, so you should do it more often i guess and remember to draw from the shoulder to get rid of that. Also i dont know why you only draw 1 ellipse in one of them funnel in the Funnel exercise.

Boxes: I know perspective is pretty hard to grasp at first, I suggest you to rewatch the perspective video again and redo the last organic perspective exercise because you didnt draw through the form which is the most important thing, because sure you draw things in 2D space, but you have to understand it 3 dimensionally and thats really the point of this exercise.

Next step: Redo the organic boxes with the backside of the boxes and after that you can go to 250 boxes

12:31 AM, Saturday April 23rd 2022

ok thanks for the review i'm very happy to be criticized

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11:50 AM, Saturday July 2nd 2022

YOU HAVE WOBBLY LINES,

DO THE EXERCISE AGAIN BUT CONTROL YOUR SPEED, I SEE A LOT OF FRAYING IN SUPERIMPOSED LINES.

PLEASE DO THIS FIRST BUT WITH CONTROLLED SPEED.

SIT STRAIGHT

ARMS 90 DEGREES TO TABLE (OR CLOSE)

DO NOT CLEAN OVER THE TABLE TO DRAW

LIFT YOUR ELBOW

AND DRAW WITH CONFIDENCE AND CONTROLLED SPEED NOT TOO FAST OR TOO SLOW

ONE THING AS WELL THE CAMERA PLEASE MAKE SURE ITS CLOSE THE PICTURES.

Next Steps:

DO THE LINES AGAIN BUT WITH THE ABOVE INSTRUCTIONS THATS ALL.

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