9:57 AM, Sunday April 9th 2023
I got a 404 error opening your link, can you please check again ?
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1:15 PM, Sunday April 9th 2023
https://imgur.com/a/HHSIbbt this is another link
1:32 AM, Monday April 10th 2023
Your mistakes have been significantly dimmed, albeit some slight inconsistency. You may also want to make the points further away from each other, in order to fully utilize your whole arm. But for now, feel free to move on to the next challenge. I wish you good luck.
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