Hi, Just to say, I'm still a beginner myself and I just handed in my homework for lesson 1 a couple days ago. So think of this not as expert feedback but more as a sugession from someone at your level.

1-1: Pretty clean imo.

1-2: you're overshooting a little. I don't personally think that's a huge deal but again this is where I'd like to see someone who know what they're talking about chip in. Maybe ask as a query what could be done of it.

1-3: Ghosted planes look clean. I like them.

1-4:Table looks clean too. some of them aren't touching but that's more than acceptable at this point. Also, :)

1-5: Again, clean. Top left of page 2 looks a little shaky like you dropped your line confidence for a moment. but otherwise it's perfect imo.

1-6: No real change in degree of the ellipses. apart from that I think you're more than done.

1-7: clean, all good.

1-8: You need to ghost your lines more and maybe rewatch the video on perspective. Some of the lines are diverging where they should be converging so that's a place to improve. Also remember, you can ghost past where you want the line to end and then just draw upto where the line really ends. Other than that It's done imo. if you just rewatch that lesson and then move along it's good enough.

1-9:Looks good imo. you've kinda made the same mistake as me by changing from squares to rectangles over time but it looks correct for the most part. However, remember that as the boxes turn, they'd have a tighter angle inwards going along the up-down axis.

1-10: Increase box density to help sell the effect more.

Apart from all that i've said I feel like you've absolutely learned a lot from this lesson. I can scroll up and down and see a big difference in line quality and confidence. I'd say you're ready to move along to the 250 box challenge.

P.s.: I've not gotten any feedback for my work yet so if you've learned from anything I said consider looking at my submission and helping me out.

Hi Bodaciousss,

These are your major issues. I am saying this to help you. Many of your pages were well done and you can and will improve in time. Taking what other critiquers said into account, please see the following:

Superimposed lines - Please make sure that you have the same starting point for each superimposed line. Ghosting may help you here.

Your Ghosted lines, Ghosted Ellipses in planes, your second Table of Ellipses pages look mostly empty. Please consider filling more page space. Also, you did not draw all of the required lines for the ghosted ellipses in planes exercise. Your plane should have. two diagonal lines, 1 horizontal line, and 1 vertical line. Basically it should look like an X with a + plus sign merged. Many of these you did correctly, others you left this out.

Not an insult, but your rotated boxes exercise was done incorrectly. Please watch and read the material again: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/rotatedboxes and don't be afraid to use the completed homework example of rotated boxes as a reference.

I know you can do it! Don't give up!

Lars,