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8:00 AM, Sunday May 16th 2021

Hi Edwintalks!

Congrats for finishing lesson 1! You did it :)

Here are some points worth noting:

  1. Superimposed Lines: Fraying only happens on one end, nice effort you made!

  2. Ghosted Lines: Progress is significantly seen compared to your Superimposed Homework, very good job! A bit of arcing here and there, but it's fine.

  3. Ghosted Planes: Well done! Lines are accurate enough and progress is definitely made! You did overshoot on some boxes though, but neat and good work!

  4. Ghosted Ellipses: Confident and 3-4 times redrawn ellipses, nicely done! Ellipses still have a lot of overshoots, however, good job!

  5. Tables of Ellipses: Accuracy increases while keeping the lines confident, great!

  6. Funnels: Ellipses follow the direction of minor axis, well done! Accuracy increases nicely, although I would recommend you to gradually increase the degree of the ellipses as they are moving towards out of the funnel

  7. Plotted Perspective: Nothing much to say, solid work!

  8. Rough Perspective: Note that we're actually making boxes in 1PP for this exercise, thus take your time in predicting where we want to place our dots! The X and Y axis in this exercise is always parallel and perpendicular to the horizon line consecutively.

  9. Rotated Boxes: Well done in executing this exercise! You finished it pretty solid!

  10. Organic Perspective: Progress is clearly shown throughout this exercise, although I do notice that you do a little undershoot lines, but overall greatly done!

Cheers!

Next Steps:

Continue in doing especially Superimposed Lines as a part of your warm up, and proceed to 250 Box Challenge! Good luck! :)

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12:59 PM, Sunday May 16th 2021

Thanks for the Critique ^^

I think I will continue working on my ghosting lines and superimposed lines as a warm up,

but I am realy glad that my work isnt that bad and I am kinda hyped up now, so thanks for that.

9:31 AM, Monday May 17th 2021

Glad to know that it helps you! Best of luck in your DrawaBox journey. :)

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